Panel 2 is perfect at conveying her unhappy decision to say something she might regret. If that's not what you intended to convey, then "Oops."
Either there's someone else, a messed up history or she's just one of those ultra arty modern types where "traditional" stuff like compliments on appearance and the guy paying for dates piss her off.
That's not good.
Went back to reread the last few pages after reading this one and really get all the hints . Nicely done.
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